We started back today and I've already used so many ideas, concepts and materials from the CSUWP to plan and begin the first week! 
I started today with Greg's I Wish I Weren't So... poems with my seventh graders and with the Where I'm From poems with my ninth graders.  I used the idea of mentor texts as a bridge to writing and EVERY SINGLE ONE OF MY 120 STUDENTS WROTE A POEM!  That is amazing.  There are usually at least a handful of kids who can't ever seem to get started, no matter how helpful I think I'm being.   The mentor texts, combined with the brilliant prompts, were just the ticket to give them the construct they needed in which to begin.  Tonight they are decorating the covers of their writer's notebooks (thanks Sue!) and taping some of the quotes from Lorynda's demo on the inside front cover. 
I am so grateful to the CSUWP for giving me such an incredible gift, and to all of you kick-ass teachers for sharing your blood, sweat and genius.  Here's my latest poem (a bit different than the August anxiety ones that I've been posting lately), written after school today.
Infection
 
 I am going to breathe verbs 
 all over your chair
 and pour beakers of adjectives
 on all the desktops.
 
 I am going to rub the pencil sharpener 
 with nouns no paper can resist
 and hang contagious phrases from the ceiling.
  
 Your notebooks will run a fever
 and your pens will bleed dry
 in an effort to keep up with your 
 Brilliant Ideas.  
 
 Don’t bother washing your hands.
 
 Antibiotics and tincture of echinacea
 will only encourage me while
 lowering your resistance.
 
 This epidemic is airborne
 spit-borne
 piss-and-vinegar borne
 and it doesn’t matter
 what kind of immunity 
 you’ve built up
 over years and years of
 swimming around in 
 educational Petri dishes
 
 because we are quarantined 
 and this condition is permanent
 and the date to drop the class 
 was yesterday.
I'm looking forward to seeing everyone in September, so I can personally thank you and tell you again what a difference you've made in my life.
Cheers,
M.
Thursday, August 25, 2005
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I hope you all are enjoying your school year. The first a1nd last months of year are always the hardest from: the first because I'm exhausted from not being used to the routine, and at the end of the year, just plain exhausted ebcause I know the end is near.
Damn typos!
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